The Raven and the Pig


The Raven and the Pig

by Lou Kemp

GENRE:   Magical realism

Synopsis of The Raven and the Pig   Book 2

As the music dies, the magician Celwyn is mortally wounded.  His darker, immortal brother Pelaez brings him back, barely, with his magic. The party of protagonists travel on the Nautilus to the Cape Verde Islands and the healer of immortals.  During the journey, Professor Kang and Bartholomew can not tell if Pelaez will keep his brother alive.  Captain Nemo is ready to evict Pelaez forcibly, and keeping Celwyn alive is the only thing that restrains him.

After Celwyn is saved, the healer requests payment for his services. This sends the adventurers to the catacombs in Capuchin where their experience is one they will not forget. Before it is over, several of the protagonists question why it seems everyone from warlocks and vampires to witches, seem to be congregating in their world. Before it is over, some of them become surprising allies, and a few of their allies turn against them. 

In part II, work on the new flying machine begins in earnest bringing attention from the Mafioso and a cherub-like warlock called Duncan.  After a final battle with Duncan, the flying machine is destroyed and everyone at their compound is murdered by one of their own. 


Instead of trotting left down the hallway to the cabins, Kang detoured as quietly as possible into the study.  As he feared, he found Pelaez standing over Celwyn; he was also sitting at the Captain’s dinner table.  The man in front of him was the real one.


Pelaez had Celwyn’s arm in a vise-like grip, his voice too low to hear anything but the menace in it.   Kang saw the pain on Celwyn’s face, and his wide-open eyes.  


“Leave him alone!”  Kang cried.  “Get away from him!”  the automat flew at Pelaez who laughed and backed up, literally into the air.  Qing squawked from atop the library shelves.


Celwyn’s face relaxed, and he whispered, “Don’t…let him hurt Qing,” before closing his eyes.


Bartholomew arrived with the Captain close behind.  Nemo’s face darkened when he saw the tableau. 


“What is going on?” he barked as he stalked into the room.


A half-dozen of the crew thudded to a stop behind him.  


Like a feather on an air draft, Pelaez drifted to the floor. “Nothing.”


Kang shouted, “He was twisting Jonas’ arm when I came in!”


Bartholomew lowered his head, and took a step toward Pelaez.  Of a sudden a wall of flames surrounded him.


“Not on my ship ----” Captain Nemo gestured to his crew who drew their side arms.


The flames disappeared and Pelaez executed a short bow. “Please, this is a simple misunderstanding.”  He leaned against the sofa, yawning.


“No, —it is not,” Kang ground out.  Despite the threat of flames or worse, he came within inches of Pelaez, so close he could have smelled his breath.  “I know what you want.”  He tapped Pelaez’s chest.  “In case you need an incentive to leave Jonas alone.  You won’t get anything from us if you hurt him. And nothing anyhow: Bartholomew has made half of the flying machine so far, and keeps in it his memory ---- without a written copy.  There is nothing to steal.”  Kang pointed at his forehead.  “I have the rest of it, and we will only give it to Captain Nemo.”


Bartholomew glared at Pelaez.


“I am not after your information.”  Pelaez’s smile sent a cold hand up Kang’s back.  


“Yes, you are!”  Bartholomew’s outrage rattled the bottles on the bar.


“How can you abuse Nemo’s hospitality in this manner?”  Kang stomped to the aquatic window and back, sparking with anger.  He glanced at the guard Nemo had left in the room as he got to his feet and shook his head, seeming unaware of what had happened.


Nemo still clutched a dinner napkin in his hand.  With a wave, he dismissed his crew and eyed Pelaez.  In a voice full of menace and certainty, he said, “If you weren’t keeping Mr. Celwyn alive, you would be expendable, Sir.”


Pelaez opened his hands in supplication. “Again, this is a misunderstanding---”

Captain Nemo glared at him.

Bartholomew sighed.  “It seems we’re all dependent upon each other.”  

Pelaez had no limits on boldness, going from provocateur to questioning them.

“What do you receive from this besides the flying machine, Captain?”  Pelaez asked, his voice casual, which raised another flag of suspicion in Kang.

“I am repaying a debt.  And, I too, respect Mr. Celwyn.”

The automat suspected that if they saved Jonas, with Celwyn helping him, Nemo would have no problem dealing with his brother and his malicious magic.  Until then, he had to wait.  As they filed out of the room to return to the dining room, Pelaez asked Kang, as if it didn’t matter, “How did you know I wasn’t actually with you?”

The automat nearly laughed.  Let him wonder. 

He would remember to tell both Nemo and Bartholomew later what he’d surmised.  Pelaez could disable the Nautilus just as easily as Celwyn, or he could do other things; he was playing with them, pretending to behave.  There was something he wanted, and the Professor would bet it had just as much to do with Thales, as the flying machine.

About the Author:

Early work was horror and suspense, later work morphed into a combination of magical realism, mystery and adventure painted with a horrific element as needed.

I’m one of those writers who doesn’t plan ahead, no outlines, no clue, and I sometimes write myself into a corner. Atmospheric music in the background helps. Black by Pearl Jam especially.

More information is available at I'd love to hear from you and what you think of Celwyn, Bartholomew, and Professor Xiau Kang.


2009 The anthology story Sherlock’s Opera appeared in Seattle Noir, edited by Curt Colbert, Akashic Books. Available through Amazon or Barnes and Noble online. Booklist published a favorable review of my contribution to the anthology.

2010 My story, In Memory of the Sibylline, was accepted into the best-selling MWA anthology Crimes by Moonlight, edited by Charlaine Harris. The immortal magician Celwyn makes his first appearance in print.

2018 The story, The Violins Played before Junstan is published in the MWA anthology Odd Partners, edited by Anne Perry. The Celwyn series begins.

Present The full length prequel, The Violins Played before Junstan, to the Celwyn book series is published on Kindle. The companion book, Farm Hall is also published where Pelaez, another immortal magician and Celwyn's brother, makes his first appearance. The remaining books in the series: Music Shall Untune the Sky, The Raven and the Pig, The Pirate Danced and the Automat Died, will be available beginning in August 2021.


Q&A With the Author

When did you first consider yourself to be a writer?
When I was about 15. It took until I was about 22 before I sold my first story.

What advice do you have for a new writer?
Work yourself up to not being afraid to let someone else see your work.  You’ll never get better until you get feedback.  So, do not ask friends and family---they’ll pat you on the head and say it is wonderful.  You want well-meaning strangers, like from a writing group(online or in person), to get the best feedback.

What is the easiest part of the writing process for you?
Deciding what the plot will be because I make it up as I go.

What is your favorite part of this story?
After Captain Nemo is attacked, he wakes up with Celwyn passed out on top of him.

Which Character was the most fun to write about? Why?
Celwyn because of his free nature and unpredictability---also because he cares, and does his best no matter the odds.

Which Character was the hardest to write about? Why?

Captain Nemo was difficult to write because I wanted to retain his mysteriousness and yet show more of what drives him.  He does not like magic, and he does not like Pelaez.  You can imagine what happens when they are together.




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Lou Kemp will be awarding a $25 Amazon or Barnes and Noble GC to a randomly drawn winner, a 2nd  randomly drawn winner a mug and pen with the book image and a 3rd randomly drawn winner will win a eBook via rafflecopter during the tour.

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  1. The book sounds very intriguing.

  2. Good morning everyone,
    First off, thank you for having me here at Literary Gold. A great site, and tons of information about all kinds of books.
    Although the purpose of my visit is to talk about my just released book 2 of the Celwyn series, please ask about any of the other books in the series, The Violins Played before Junstan (prequel), or Music Shall Untune the Sky (book 1). There is also a companion book, Farm Hall where Celwyn's darker immortal brother is enjoying a visit to a manor in the English countryside with the atomic scientists that the Allies stole from Hitler. Their keeper, MI6 officer Oliver refers to them as stewing in "marinated craziness."

  3. I read this book and loved it. I highly recommend it.

  4. Congratulations on your release of The Raven and the Pig, Lou, I enjoyed the Q&A and the excerpt, your book sounds like a fascinating read! Good luck with your book and the tour! Thanks for sharing it with me and have a great week!

  5. I love this cover thanks for sharing a peek inside.

  6. I love magic in stories and I have to say I find the title most intriguing.

  7. I love the cover and the excerpt.

  8. Thank you all for stopping by, and for your kind comments. I am releasing book 3 soon, The Pirate Danced and the Automat Died. If anyone is up for reading an ARC and review, please contact me at my site, Otherwise, the book will be available in about a month.
    A big thank you to Literary Gold and Goddess Tours for all of their help for this tour.

  9. I like the cover and the excerpt. Thanks for sharing!

  10. This book sounds very intriguing. Love the cover!

  11. Thank you so much for sharing! This sounds like such a great read; love the title and cover design as well!


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